Write That Essay sentences

Walt: identify WTE(write that essay) sentences to improve out writing 

simple sentence:
Hornby high school will be moving into new buildings soon.

very short sentence:
Help the turtles dont litter.

the power sentence: 
Don't litter stop global warming, and let the turtles live.

Red,White and Blue:
Kim jong un is fat,short, and ugly.

The adverb start:
Interestingly, Kim jong un doesn't feed his people but can afford to spend thousands on luxury food and drink for him self.

Begin with a preposition: 
In North Korea people are lead to believe that Kim ill sung single-handedly ended the Korean war.

The -ING start:
hoping to start a better life, many north Korean people try to defect (move) to surrounding countries, mainly south Korea.

The -ED start 
committed to becoming as fat as possible, Kim jong un doesn't give any food to the starving people in his country.

The semi-colon
Kim jong un is fat; he looks like a potato.

The EM dash 
Kim jong un -the fat potato- is a overweight spud

The W-start sentence
when Kim jong un was born, north Korea's average weight went up by 20%

Explore the subject 
Kim jong un, who is extremely overweight, likes to play with nuclear bombs.(because he is to scared to throw hands with other world leaders)

my art work that inspired banksy to paint the girl with the balloon

ok so i dont have a photo but banksy hit me up a while ago and said that he was keen to paint one of my pristine crayon drawing on a wall in London.(btw if you are wondering who banksy is he is not hat guy from a band he is actually just a local guy that smokes heaps of weed.
and because he smokes heaps of weed he has very strong thoughts on our society so he just paints things on walls everywhere.
OH and he is a god at pranking the world, yea h remember when he made that photo frame that cut up a painting? yeah he is a GOD
thanks guys bye

Should drugs be aloud in sport?

Should Drugs Should be Allowed in Sport 

For:

*athletes could be able to stay at the top of their game for longer if they wished to(without sustaining a lot of injury's) .

*people wouldn't be able to return from injury faster because they will be able to use different medicines to help their bodies recover.

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Against:

*some athletes that choose not to take ped's will have a huge disadvantage even if they are more skilled than the other people.
*certain sports could lose some of the competitive feel due to people using ped's
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i think that drugs use in sports is a very interesting topic and it has a lot of sides to it. For example one thing you might hear a lot of people saying is "drugs in sports are bad because they give an unfair advantage to the people using them". But sometimes its not that simple see a person could be taking a PED (performance enhancing drug) of other banned substances because they have suffered a bad injury during their training or in their last competitive event.

the first and most backed reason for drugs being allowed in sport is so that athletes would be able to compete at the highest level of their chosen sport for longer. see i compete in MMA(mixed martial arts) and i have heard from a lot of people that have been around the sport for many years that they wish that drugs were aloud, but they don't say this because they want an advantage against their opponents in the cage, they say this because they are only human and they have been competing in a very physically demanding sport for years. So their bodies are starting to wear out and get injured more frequently. So drugs should be aloud in sport because then our favourite fighter or other sport player would be able to stay in their chosen sport for longer and in better health, without as many injuries.

But in sport we all want a to watch a game that is fair, exciting, and competitive, which leads me to my next point which is the leading reason that many sport's brought in drug testing agencies, and this reason is, people that are not on drugs will have a huge disadvantage in their chosen sport because obviously they will not because the people that are using ped's usually have higher testosterone levels which is obviously unfair for men's sport but the people that get caught using TRT (testosterone replacement therapy) the most are female athletes. Some people even use drugs that make their bodies muscle movements more explosive which for a person in a sport like sprinting or mma that is probably the biggest advantage you can have. So if we look at the argument from this point then drugs should not be aloud in sport because people that could otherwise be the best in the world at their sport will just be overshadowed be people that are using drugs, so if you want to know who the real top athletes are? well then join the majority of people and say no to drugs in sport

So now after seeing reasoning for both sides of the story what do you think? do you think that drugs should be aloud in sport, or do you think that they should not be aloud. I think that drugs should not be aloud in sport (at a high level) because as stated above they are just to unfair and even with the current testing in place for athletes many still slip past that and gain that unfair advantage.Do you want to watch fair, and  competitive sport then say NO to drugs 

persuasive writing

What is pathos, logos and ethos

what is pathos?

pathos is the use of emotion to persuade someone to agree with your point of view on a certain topic 

examples of pathos are: using powerful words, humour, and the use of religious or spiritual references

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winter appeal critical literacy

yo yo critical literacy time boys today we doing some looking at the og's the one and only salvation army so they made a poster about poverty and stuff so im gonna pick apart their poster and see if it ticks all the boxes of Mr Scott Aitken (masters of contemporary education).

1. is the text fair) yes i think the poster is fair i think it gives reasonable stats that there is a real problem in some New Zealand homes. these problems range from things such as buying food,to not being able to afford power to keep there house warm and healthy.

2. why is the text written in the way it is) the text is written in a way to try and convince people to donate or give money to the organisation that is trying to help the people that are in need of more money for simple things that some people take for granted.

3. who benefits from the text) the people that benefit from the text are the people that are in need of more money to afford things such as good healthy food or power and gas to warm their house.

Tinkercad drill gauge

Drill gauge 

(on tinkercad)

During making my drill gauge i had to learn how to make the hole's the right size so they would mirror the measurements that we were given to make our real life drill gauge.

the steps that i took are displayed below (maybe a couple out of order)
Step 1: the first thing that i had to do was make my solid drill gauge with no holes, the measurements i used for this were 100mm in length and 20mm in width.
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Before any holes added 

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step 2/final step: this part was adding in my holes for this i had to set a solid cylinder shape to (hole)

and then set it to its respective size eg for a 10mm drill piece i would set the hole to 10mm x 10mm .
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Below is a video showing me making my holes and finishing my drill gauge

Essay writing

What have i been learning?: how to write a good essay that ticks all the boxes of the sexxy and golden paragraph structure.

How have i been learning it?: in English we have been writing a class essay with Mr Scott Aitken (he likes to let us know he is doing studies for his MASTERS of Contemporary Education)
but yeah from that we have learnt how to write a good essay.
Why have i been learning it?: to prepare our self for future essay's.
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What have i been learning?: how to punctuate my work properly (when i want to) using things such as commas full stop's and other things. yeah cause i didn't listen in primary i was to busy spending my writing time hiding in the reading corner
How have i been learning it?: Scott Aitken been dropping MASTERS OF CONTEMPORARY EDUCATION level knowledge bombs on my classes noggin.