Walt: identify WTE(write that essay) sentences to improve out writing
simple sentence:
Hornby high school will be moving into new buildings soon.
very short sentence:
Help the turtles dont litter.
the power sentence:
Don't litter stop global warming, and let the turtles live.
Red,White and Blue:
Kim jong un is fat,short, and ugly.
The adverb start:
Interestingly, Kim jong un doesn't feed his people but can afford to spend thousands on luxury food and drink for him self.
Begin with a preposition:
In North Korea people are lead to believe that Kim ill sung single-handedly ended the Korean war.
The -ING start:
hoping to start a better life, many north Korean people try to defect (move) to surrounding countries, mainly south Korea.
The -ED start
committed to becoming as fat as possible, Kim jong un doesn't give any food to the starving people in his country.
The semi-colon
Kim jong un is fat; he looks like a potato.
The EM dash
Kim jong un -the fat potato- is a overweight spud
The W-start sentence
when Kim jong un was born, north Korea's average weight went up by 20%
Explore the subject
Kim jong un, who is extremely overweight, likes to play with nuclear bombs.(because he is to scared to throw hands with other world leaders)
I like the answers on your question because it is very funny. Next time make sure to add capital letters for names.
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